God, I liked this chapter. But I'm really tired today, so I really can't be bothered to write a long review.
You said you have GCSE Science... what year you in? That makes you older than be right? (I'm in year 8)Now I feel like a right idiot; talking to someone about there writing when there older than me, lol.
Well, back the the story... what are the guys gonna do about 'greasy guy'? Teach him a lesson he'll never forget I hope!
Hope you get round to updating more... even though you already update lots, but still. Now its half term I'll have lots more time to send better reviews. I like to get my point across. ^^
I guess I've written as much as I usually go when I said I wouldn't. This website it like a chat room lol.
I look forward to another chapter.
Author's response
Hello again ^_^
I'm in year 10, don't feel like an idiot, I'm a very immature year 10, most of my friends are in year 9. You're a very good reviewer! I'm glad you liked that chapter. I wrote it real quick. I'm still ill so haven't got my laptop back yet but tomorrows the last day so it won't be that bad. Then I can have my life back (my laptop). Anyway thankyou for the review!
Lu
ps: I'll update ASAP I gotta tidy my room now then revise, life isn't fun :(