This reminds me of The Picture of Dorian Gray. I liked that book. And this story was well written, but a tip; space out the paragraphs a bit. I kept losing my place, lol. 'Twas good though. I liked it. Ish it a one-shot or a story?
Author's response
Sorry it's taken me so long to respond. I'm naturally slow. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it. It was a oneshot, though I've been considering continuing it, since people have asked.