ClairDeLune : what is your problem? this story is anything but lame! and plus if you don't like it, why the hell are you reading it? have some respect for other people, MCArmyWife has obviously spent alot of time writing this and putting in a huge amount of effort to please us readers. I'm not trying to start an argument or anything, but i did think that comment to made was a little bit harsh.
Anyways, i think this story is AWESOME! No matter how it ends, i know you'll make it all worth the wait :) x