I really love this, but the thing is, I can relate to it almost completely. It suited it's length, it was good it didn't drag on or anything.
F oxox.
Author's response
I'm glad you can relate to this. Although I suppose this may or may not be something that you might want to relate to. I guess it all depends on how you feel about the whole situation though.
And thanks for the review. It means alot hearing opinions on the piece.