From a hardcore player's POV: I loved every syllable. And I respectfully disagree with the previous reviewer's statements about the finger and rib injuries being unbelievable; adrenaline by itself can keep people going who have sustained far worse injuries. Anyway... the descriptions are beautiful and the writing is far superior to most professional fantasy/romance writers I've come across lately.
OH %$^#... I just noticed you wrote Ceasefire(!)... Best WoW FF ever. EVAR. That's actually the story I came her to find, and then I read this one, and thought, "gee, this is almost as good as that one story I was looking for..."
Ha. You're awesome.