I love that story, especially because you brought some real-life moments in, like the Mr. Brownstone shoulder thing, the "Welcome to the Jungle Video" or Axl being always late at rehersal. Makes it more realistic. I can imagine that there would have been conversations like that, i actually thought of looking for videos where Axl played with Slash onstage on youtube. :) (Please tell me there's a video of Axl playing air guitar!!)
Actually, the more I think about them and watching them in videos, the more I think they acutally had a fling back then ;) Who knows...
Great story, I hope you'll continue with it or write another Slaxl one! Keep it up! :)