I really liked it and in my opinion that actually suited Vincent's personality perfectly. The out side he seems to be...morbid and dark but on the inside he's in pain...hated rotten things fit his personality so well I was surprised that you wrote about it because everyone just sticks to the one story but think about it...he hates himself for what he is ... and it showed this in your story with out you intending it. Cloud in this story is sort of an image of vincent on the inside so well done I love it!