In my opinion, this is the best chapter so far. For some reason, I felt like it had the most emotion behind it. (Not that the others didn't, because they had a lot of emotion behind them.)
I can't really describe it properly. But please just know that this was really good.
Author's response
thank you hun. your reviews are always much appreciated. i felt bad for the lack of updates, then my comp crashed and i lost two chaps id been working on, ad when i posted this one, i took it in a complete different direction i had previously wanted but i liked it. it was short but once i get back in the swing ill be better lol.