i agree with austrian_shadow kinda, the only part where i difer is with the time part i think me personly that it would be better for him to ether be dropped somewhere in the time frame of the Yuuzhan Vong War, or sometime in the later Legacy Era (comic books). the war and chaos would make for some good action and would do really good with the character development of harry that you have already started. but its your story and im just a reader i dont do the writing so you dont have to listen to me im just saying what i think would be cool and fun to read.
Author's response
Not exactly the kind of crossover I intended. I've read many very well written Late era SW crossovers, but this is only a 'sorta' cross. It'll explain itself in the next chapter.
Alorkin