(#) zicou 2010-03-29
Awesome story :)
Even if it looks terrible to write the translation in the story, it would be less terrible than what you did.
I read a sentence, i must go down the page to find its meaning, then i must go up and find where i was, again and again... very difficult and unpleasant to read :'(
I think the better would be to only write in English, and let the other languages go.
Putting that away, great chapter, story, i love it so...
Continuuuuuuuuue,
Z.