I could kinda kill Gojyo right now.
I guess that's because I'd never try and have sex with one person and when they didn't want - to just go off and find someone else. Much less a person who's just as close as the first.
I love the fic and I think you did a good job on both characters, for once, I am rather pissed Gojyo. what a...ugh!!
See, you're a great writer to actually get me to admit I am mad at someone who doesn't even exist. Go you!