Wow! I'm not a big fan of crossovers, but you've got me on this one, Alorkin. I love Star Wars, but I've never read any of the books. Harry's recitation of the Jedi Code to Master Yoda was a stroke of genius. Harry was able to make strong arguments for his conditions and cite differences between himself and Palatine and ultimately, Vader.
Go Ginny! She was the first to open the floor against Dumbledore's manipulation of an already corrupt system. Messing with Harry and people who trusted the old man only made it worse.
The appearance of the people he loved in life and their stories turned Harry's head big time. He could have stayed angry and refused to return, but the love in his heart wouldn't allow it, especially when he found out how Hermione died. His noble nature screamed for him to go back and make it all right, but he knew he'd need some help to do it--hence, the conditions, which are more than justified.
Thanks for another great chapter in what's shaping up to be a great story. WELL DONE!
Author's response
I tend to agree. Most crossovers are carelessly written. In the case of Star Wars, they fall into three general categories. 1)Harry goes to the other universe, usually after knocking off Voldemort, and making a life there. 2)Harry goes for a period of time, and comes back to save the world from the depredations of Lord Voldemort and sometimes the antics of 'Lord Manipulatus'. 3)He remains on Earth throughout his training.
I've seen one, called 'The Chronicles of the Chosen One', by the most excellent Padawan Lynn, where this occurs.
This is actually the basis for both my HP/SW crossovers.
Yoda needed some convincing, and what better than facts? I'll admit comparing Voldemort to Palpatine was underhanded, but it did the trick.
Ginny: I've never felt Ginny was a good choice for Harry, mostly because Rowling never bothered to develop her character, and instead, gave us: 'SUPER-GINNY!' Defended of the meek and helpless. Smarter than Hermione! Prettier than Cho! Loyal-er than Ron and a better seeker than Harry! It's SUPER-GINNY!' (Action figures sold at toy stores everywhere!)
On the other hand, I can write her as being stronger-willed and less inclined to manipulations than in canon. She won't be coming into play for a few chapters, though.
The appearance of his loved ones: Right on the head. That's exactly why I did that. He needed a solid reason to return, and his friends, and especially the girl he loved, gave it to him.
Thanks again.
Alorkin