I really like your characterizations. You write Zuko and Mai's characters extremely well as well as their relationship with each other. I loved your writing style, and just enjoyed the way you told the story!! I was a little confused, because I hadn't read the prequel to this one, but once I went back and that, this one made more sense (i.e. Ursa's involvement). Anyways, great job and I'm definitely going to read more!!