(#) pfeil 2010-04-20
Seems like a rather fair assessment of everything. I'll be interested in how the "short-term" relationship will work out; With a Harry who's more focused and less of a doormat, I suspect the problems he has with her will be much lessened.
No complaints about any of the clichés that may or may not have been in there. Everything fitted together well enough.
Author's response
The H/Hr relationship will not be a major focus of the story.