Excellent start. Interesting story line that bashes most of the people that I don't like, while supporting the ones I do like. And MOST importantly, written with almost NO spelling and grammatical errors. Hope your sister gets better soon and that you have the time to continue this story.
Author's response
Thanks Muggle Prof.
I'm not going to bash the Weasley family too much, ('cept for Percy, but he's adopted.), because I need them. Ron is a favorite target, but as you've seen in chapter 3, he's not as big a jerk as i usually write him. Besides, Luna will be keeping him busy.
I especially thank you for the comment on my spelldown/grammatical accuracy. I truly despise a story which is otherwise very tell-able, but has so many misspelled words, you cannot read it.
FireLemming is doing as well as can be expected, and the doctors are optimistic.
Alorkin