awesome and hot story.
and i want a sequel ASAP.
seriously, this is great. a bit more story into it though?
nice of you to bring in amy and fred into the story, and i like your OC.
some sugestions, get Angel to lose his soul or kill him outright, Angelus working for Xander here is a disaster waiting to happen, sunydale destroyed?? taking over all of California?? ah the things that can happen...
turn buffy!!
Author's response
Thanks for your review, I didn't get a review alert, so I wasn't aware of it until tonight.
I will be working on a sequel as soon as my muse permits. There will be more story and the sex won't be as detailed.
I'm glad you like Jill, she is fun to write, and as for Angel, if you remember Xander's instruction to Darla, he is going to be a pile of dust in the near future.
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