Very good. I am really enjoying this story. My one little concern is that Harry is telling a lot of people about him dying and coming back. I would think that it would be more of a secret.
Looking forward to more.
Author's response
Harry is only telling the who need to know, in order to do the jobs he needs them to do. The order members, needed to have a valid reason to trust him, instead of Dumbledore. the Rings would only go so far. You'll notice that each of them is fond of him.
Andromeda, Amelia, Augusta and Carolyn needed to know because he's putting them on the front line, and he disagrees with Dumbledore's policy of 'zero information until it can do no good'. They'll be facing Dumbledore in the council, and blocking his manipulations, and it's only right that they should know why they're risking their lives and livelihoods.
I think he'll be telling the story once or twice more, the last time to a larger audience. That audience will be his Jedi.
Alorkin