Review for JEDI POTTER

JEDI POTTER

(#) jabarber69 2010-05-03

hey is ole harrikins gonna shag susan, and luna too!!! hell bring in amelia to that group that would be so kinky....

mighty mouse, where the hell did you come up with that....

Author's response

I have no plans to turn this into a harem, and the will be no overt smuttage. Any adult activities will be understated or off-screen entirely.

Susan is there because Amelia was there. Harry warned her in chapter three, that this would happen and promised help when it did. Susan was in the house and had to be removed for her safety. HEr lust for the green eyed quidditch god, is well documented in fanfiction, if not in canon.

Her involvement here, will be as a close friend, and senior lieutenant of Harry's Jedi Order.

As for Mighty Mouse, I've always liked that entry line: "Here I come to save the day!" Face it. It could have been worse...it could have been Underdog.

Alorkin