Review for YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

YOU DON’T ALWAYS GET WHAT YOU ASK FOR

(#) wolf550e 2010-05-04

The entire chapter was an infodump. And again, if the "struggle" between Harry and Dumbledore/Voldemort was likened to a chess game, Dumbledore would start as a black king with all his pieces missing and himself in check while Harry would start with eight queens. Do you think that makes for an interesting match?

Author's response

If that were the key to the story, you'd be right. If that's what you're reading the story to find, stop now and save your time for some story you'd like more