Review for Heir of Sword and Stave

Heir of Sword and Stave

(#) longreachjones 2010-05-14

Now THAT is what I call an opener! Very nicely done on this attempt.

RE: your plans for a writing style, as an idea, you may want to plan several chapters ahead, then flesh it out a chapter at a time, this way you don't get as many continuity issues as you might, at also helps somewhat with writer's block.