Review for MindStalker

MindStalker

(#) HakuRules1424 2010-05-16

ahh well, where to begin. at the end of it, i started to panic when i couldn't find chapter 14 right away. then i realized, you pulled a classic cliff-hanger. your story is compelling and a fun read, but please, please for the love of all that is romantic in the world. have a happy ending :) i await further chapters, job well done.

Author's response

About cliffhangers... once you start, you can't stop. I don't think I meant to pull one, but then it felt right, so why not go with it? About the happy ending - I plan on making Reona happy in the long run, if that's what you meant. Not so sure about Ashton and Elliot. The next chapter will be a lot harder to write so it'll take a while. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.