i loved claude and grey in this chapter XD :
- "I knew a Max once," Claude informed them drowsily. "Nice-lookin' guy. Of course, he didn't know I existed, but he had a really nice ass."
--Grey leaned forward, pinching the bridge of his nose with forefinger and thumb. "Somehow we’ve completely diverted from the original topic of conversation . . .”
very great ;-D
and claude, one more time:
- "Let's just go get Joan's stuff, let Claude beat the crap out of him, and get back here and celebrate!"
--"Celebrate what?" Claude asked incredulously. -- "Celebrate you beating the crap out of that guy!" Luc answered'
…that was brilliant.
Author's response
Thanks so much! I'm glad you're entertained by the humor . . . I'm really more of drama writer, so when i try to be funny I worry I'm not hitting it right. X3