- "I-Is it this door? This one on the left here -?" There was a muffled crash and a small squeal of pain. Before Grey could even become alarmed, Joan's voice rang out shakily. "Um, no. This is a closet. I'll just . . . um . . ."
…hehe, good one. =D made me laugh
- ' It smelled distinctly of angel.
…lines like that in between…
Author's response
Ohhh, Joan. >.< I don't know whether I adore her or I'm annoyed by her. She's one of those iffy characters.
Thanks for your readership!