I REALLY like this story. I think I've reread it about 5 times. It is an example of what I really hate about fanfic; getting into a story that isn't finished! Bah! Comics where bad enough.
I must say I like how Luna is still Luna but still a 'macho' gal of this universe.
Oh, I do wish that you had gone with Tasmina, another female version of Thomas. It is still sort of British and who could deny that the idea of Riddle as a Tasmanian devil is sort of appropriate? =)~