Review for 21st Century Breakdown

21st Century Breakdown

(#) xx_eddi_xx 2010-05-23

dedicated to me??? XD wow.
yeah, my backup ipod, a shitty classic fourth gen decided to eat the startup files for my comp and so im stuck commuting to the library to update. I've been writing like crazy in my notebooks though.

also, good chap. but i notice that it was lacking in the sense of using lyrics. not to be picky. its lovely, just lacked some of what it meant to be "peacemaker".

god i'm so anal, lol/

--E

Author's response

yea, that kindda buggedme, too. But Lilly is actually my friend and it took a lot for me to use her in the story, and I didn't want to take away from Lilly's death.

The next chapter is rich with lyrics, tho... you'll think youre just reading lyrics. JK.