This was so beautiful, thank you for writing a Ryden or Rydon shrug that didnt end with death and sadness. This was perfect and makes me hapy :D I agree paragraphing would be good but thats not too big hehehehe.
I think this is great as a oneshot, sometimes when things become longer than a oneshot the story seems dragged on you know? I love this how it is, thank you so much!
mwah
xo