A lovely story. I agree with Cateagle, there's definitely more to it than meets the eye. How did Harry die? Who won the Battle? All good questions needing some thorough exploration.
Good job. If you do decide to expand it, I'm all in!
Somehow reminds me of my own story called "Shadowlands", by the way :D
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I'm glad that you like it so far datbenik. Hopefully you will like the rest of the story just as much.