Review for Motorcycle

Motorcycle

(#) xelan 2010-05-31

Very nice. The most enjoyable thing I've read in a while. The Harmony elements are well done. Any chance you might write up the reaction of Ron and Ginny? I'd love to see their heads explode in rage. Nice characterization of Bill and Fleur. I find Remus' duplicity intriguing, as I hadn't seen that before. Usually, he's either good, deluded, or outright evil. Another turncoat in the Marauders really makes me rethink that group dynamic and how much Dumbles really knew about the Marauders. Thus far, I really like the balance you have in Harry and Hermione's relationship. They both seem to contribute but in different ways. Thanks for the fun. Hope to see more in the future.