(#) milli 2010-06-06
That was quite a good read. You've managed to keep the characters not too OOC. Your style of writing was simple and easy to read. In fact, I liked the humor that you injected in some of the situations. Some of them really made me laugh. It's also a plus for me that I was able to find a viewfinder story that I could enjoy without the smutty parts. (^o^)//
While I was reading, I was thinking that if the story in the manga were to go on, it would have gone the way you wrote it somehow. If Asami kept on being too stubborn to express his true feelings for Akihito, Akihito would have eventually become unable to bear the hurt.
Keep up the good work! Thanks for sharing your story!
Author's response
Thanks. :) While I do enjoy writing some smut, what I enjoy doing most is exploring their characters in new situations, so many of my fics don't contain any smut. And really, if they do contain it, I try to make it relevant to the story. I also love writing dialogue between them, and using humor because real life always has humor even in the darkest situations.
I have more fics of that sort on my LJ. The smut is friend-locked to adults only, but the rest are open to the public.