Review for Heir of Sword and Stave

Heir of Sword and Stave

(#) keichan2 2010-06-09

Until the family lines were revealed, I was wondering in what story there was a master of the staff (as a weapon) and the sword... I was certain that this was a cross-over and that Harry would be taught how to fight with said weapons by some master...

You got me! ;-) I can't believe that I didn't even think about this possibility (it's not as if there are no other HP fanfics having Harry heir of Merlin or Arthur that could have given me any hint, aren't there? ;-p)

I do wonder about the dream and the girls, though... I would say Hermione as the brunette (though to have her fly...), Ginny as the red-head, I would have said Luna as the blond, but I got back to the main page and it must be Fleur. Or not, as Luna is also cited in the character list... The black haired one, though, I have no guess...

I hope you will update soon, because I really would like to know what you intend!

Author's response

you were right that Hermione was the brunette and that Luna was the blonde, but you were wrong about Ginny. I will however tell you the redhead and black-haired girl's identities if you want me to. Fleur will come in later on in a way that not many will expect most likely.

...and the fact that Hermione is afraid of heights does not come into play. Harry and the girls will never actually fly like this, I just used it because it provided me with a way for Harry to have his girls around him yet not be able to see their faces (at least until he meets them in real life).

The flying is also really only because the Harry in my fic is like the one in canon because he loves to fly, though mine will not be a weak, powerless, wholly innocent (boo hiss) imbecile who can't tell a girl likes him unless she screams it at him.

thanks for the review, and I hope to update soon!