Wow, you went in depth with the dates of stuff in this chapter... seriously, you didn't have to go to such great lengths.
Another great chapter, thanks.
Author's response
I actually prefer to read (and write) longer chapters. My ideal is between five and ten thousand words, sometimes I get carried away. You'd be amazed at the amount I cut out. Before final editing, it was 16,519 words. Some of that will be set into the next few chapters.
Thanks for the kudo's.
Alorkin