I not sure about this story why write this well you could be working on Mind Games, oh i'm glad your writer bluk is gone, well any way i not sure if i like this story i never usally read these storise but my evil sister dare me too and i know it's only a dare but i never chiken out though i think maybe i should have no offens i just don't like these kind of story, i'm so sorry plz forgive me (i know it's really cheesey but i hate when i get bad reviews) Keep working on Mind Games