Review for Alfred A History

Alfred A History

(#) aka_thenewguy 2010-06-30

Not too bad a start. Feel's a tad rushed. Harry also seems a bit too cavalier about losing all his cash like that. I wonder where Dumblemort is during all this. And raelly wouldn't those onboard the Knight Bus have heard it hit something and wondered what it was. All in all an intriguing beginning with a promising outlook for the future.