Dude, Connor, this is seriously amazing! And really really exciting :) Like no joke, I sat on the edge of my seat the entire time. I have to admit, though, that when you said the vampire's head exploded, I thought you were talking about the child's head at first lol and I was like "Oh my gosh, mind powers! Time to bring in Stephen King!" (:
Anyway..
Have you figured out how to answer your reviews yet?