great story so far, just gotta point out the name change at a point in this chapter. whos alex?
"The months between September and mid-June passed fairly quickly with Harry growing tougher and stronger every day. Finally, the day came when Harry received a letter bearing the Hogwarts emblem. "Alex" whooped gleefully as he ripped the envelope in half and tugged out his letter."
Author's response
I can't thank you enough for pointing out that error. I used to have a tendency to write the character from my point of view, as my own name is Alex. I find it's actually easier to write like that. Here however, I must have accidentally slipped back into that habit. The error has now been corrected.