Interesting concept and basis, but I think something is messing with your formatting here, 'twas rather difficult to read with 'most everything run together. Too, there's one spot where the word "Awkward" appears on a line by itself with no real connection to the thoughts on either side of. On the positive side, you've got a good plot idea and I like that Harry's got weaknesses as well as strengths. It will be rather interesting to see the reactions of his "friends" in Britain to Dumbledore's accusations, charges, and manipulations. I would hope that some of them would stand by him.