Hi again, Leo...
Excellent chapter. Harry's already got Dumbles on the run. LOL As you can see, I'm not a Dumbledore fan, really.
Malfoy just doesn't get it, does he? I wonder if Harry's chiding is going to convince the little dork that he IS gay after all...if not entirely STUPID!
Okay...you used "whom" three times and all three times it should have been "who." Don't worry. It just takes practice. Also...no 's' on the end of toward, forward, backward, afterward, way (except as a plural), or for Merlin's sake, ANYWAY. Sigh. Now that I've got that off my chest. LOL
That said...I must again assert that your story is perfectly engaging. I'm truly enjoying reading about Harry making good friends and standing up for himself...and them as well. He really needs to teach Neville that summoning charm.
I have also read "Harry Potter and the Sword of Gryffindor" and I laughed my rear-end off through the whole thing! It really is hilarious! I kind of guessed you might have had that tale in mind when your Godric Gryffindor said what he said. Nice one!
Keep up with your McStory. I'M LOVIN' IT!
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(Sheila)