This story is very, very well written. You're very good at writing, but you probably know that! I'm not sure if you have just dropped this story, but even if you have, keep writing and exercising your talent. Thanks for the great story!
Author's response
Thank you so much! You really flatter me! Don't worry, I didn't just drop the story, I just got lazy with posting on this site. The rest is posted on a few other sites, one of which I'll link you to right here. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story just as much! XDDD
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3336865/7/Bittersweet_Reunion