Review for JEDI POTTER

JEDI POTTER

(#) vheritas 2010-07-21

Another excellent and readable chapter. The Death Squad shooting itself was priceless.

Author's response

Thank you Vheritas. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. The death Squad killing itself off was based on a movie I saw. (See the review reply for Teresa) and it seemed just the kind of stupidity they would commit.

Alorkin