Review for JEDI POTTER


(#) erik 2010-07-22

An especiially well written training section and a bit of fun with the attempted assasination. Well done.

Author's response

I remember my own training with the blade...not to mention all the physical training I've been through over the past thirty years. Learning a new physical skill takes repetition...a great deal of it.

I'm glad you liked the botched assassination attempt. It was fun to write.