i honestly think that it was good but come on imune to magic.....thats like imposible anyway write more Cya
Author's response
Oh, I know. When I first came up with this idea, my first reaction was "Oh, come on. Mary Sue." Then I tweaked it. And tweaked it. Just keep in mind that I haven't given all the information just yet. There is a specific reason why she is immune to magic, and that will come up in due time. Thank you so much for keeping an open mind and not just blowing me off because of that note. The next chapters will come as soon as possible. Thank you for the review!!!