that was.....unexpected lol i mean well no never mind it was really good i find it nice to read really good short ones instead of those 7,000 word ones ya know well good job you should write a second chapter bye
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Thanks...I think. :/
Your review is rather backhanded, indecisive and greatly lacking in punctuation. If you liked the story but certain elements didn't work for you, it's not going to make me slit my wrists to hear it.