I just finished rereading this story. As with the first time it was an enjoyable read. I missed the comment about the dice roll of death the first time but noticed it and the hint that you had already rolled it in the chapter after that notice with Luna's statement of the die has been cast. Either way the story was awesome for starting as a one shot, i am very glad that Harry got his happy ending, and look forward to any more work that you post.
Cel