Review for JEDI POTTER


(#) Peanutz 2010-08-10

i like the story so far.

on a side note

Uw huisaelf kunnen mijn goederen aan veiligheid nemen”. (Your house-elves may take my goods to safety.)

it's actually" U huiselven kunnen mijn goederen in veiligheid brengen "

Author's response

Thank you, Peanutz.

I mentioned in the Authors notes that I did not speak Dutch, though I do speak a modicum of German and 'brengen' does sound more accurate than 'nemen'.