Go on, this chapter screams for a continuation. Definitely tickled my interest. Only, if I may have this small request, please don't turn it into plain smut. Your characters deserve so much more than that!
I love seeing Harry and Hermione together and, seeing that I'm working on a Veela story myself, it would be interesting to find out whether or not our vision of this "species" is identical.
An extra kudos for your impeccably clean and Nargle-free writing. A real treat, after all the horrors I've read here.