I've tried over and over again to read your stuff, because you do have some good ideas. But I just can't get past the fact that technically, they're total garbage. It makes reading them a chore rather than a pleasure.
PLEASE make finding a good beta a top priority.
Author's response
I DO have a beta reader, but she has got work and it'll be some time before she can send the beta work back to me... so give it some time.