This is the only Leon/Yuffie story I've EVER read an it was AMAZING.
Such perfect freaking VOICE, perfect word usage, perfectperfectperfect. I adored the Cloud Mambo, because, fuck, finally someone ACKNOWLEDGES Clouds freak out moments. And instead of playing up the emotard that Cloud has become, finally finally finally all his freaky-deaky-ness managed to shine through -- and he wasn't even a main character.
And ho shit, a moseying smile is classic Cloud.
But I loved Vincent's.... knowing. Just the way Yuffie knew he knew everything, the way she quoted "..."