(#) Tidux 2010-08-22
Of all the stories you've written, this is the one that I like the most. It's the only super-early-forming bondfic I've ever read where they act like KIDS. A lot of stories end up portraying horny fifteen year olds in eleven year old bodies (perhaps because the authors are not far enough away from adolescence to sort out the memories properly), but you've combined a much more accurate view of childhood with your usual fluffy goodness. That said, if you ever get around to four years later, the lemons could be EPIC.