it´s a good ff, but not realistic... absolutely.. have you been on their concert?
i experienced their concert 2 days ago, it was my second concert. people around me were crying, fainting, they were hurt, i fell on the floor and jared didnt give any attention to that... so... little bit unrealistic that he would stop the concert... but you are a good writter ;)
Author's response
I have been to a concert but never standing :(
None of my stories are intended to be realistic, they are purely my creation!!
Thanks for the reveiw though and I'm glad you enjoyed it!