interesting concept... nice execution as well... loved the play between harry and hestia (what is only play? at least on hestia's behalf?)
loved your development of characters, harry was probably a bit too easy in giving away his gold, but nevertheless, i can see harry's seeing the good in people... especially damsels in distress...
can't wait to hear Lavenders story, and what impact it has on Harry. Will he feel responsible for letting his friend disappear and not following up with them... will he feel like he let them down in some way... probably... looking forward to see a more angry and aggressive Harry against the goblins and clients of such organisation. but at the same time looking forward above all to his interaction with Lav.
What role does Ginny play? An under developed character by JK so you could take her any-which direction...
will there be more girls joining the folds of Grim's-old place. this chapter would suggest that harry would at least try to offer them better then they currently have...
Will Farfalla be an insider for Harry. To help the over girls?
lol... lots of questions.